There's words being printed in the shape of my heart,
In the corner of my mind I know
That if this melody starts to get
Composed and restructured in the shape of
what I know our love could be.
Its like forever and almost.
We had the forever,
But the almost came and took you away,
As words developed from the lyrics written upon my heart,
I'll tell you this I'll wait patiently,
Just come by and drop in,
Then I'll know you still care about me.
That its not forever and almost,
That its forever and always.
8/6/2011
© Chimnese Davids, All rights reserved
Thursday Poets Rally #46 ( 16/6/2011-22/6/2011)
Thanks To Jingle & Poets Rally for the award
I nominate Blaga (Broken Sparkles)
Creative Minds
this is a short poem for the love
and the creativity that floods
through our minds.
we enter challenges as such
as Poets Rally, that is
that developed from the
creative minds of Jingle &
her amazing group of officials.
:)
17 comments:
Forever and always Chim...
Someone is Special
so beautifully expressed emotions.
you rock.
Happy Rally.
A lovely, sweet poem. Nice work, Chimnese.
It is wonderful to care about someone enough to want them to care about you.
I enjoyed the read Chimnese.
Genebrother
Lovely song, so romantic! :)
forever and always ... shivers came down on my spine with the idea of such sweet love! let's forget about the almost and hope for the forever! all the best! always ...
Beautiful love song.
Lovely, song-like poem... In love everything can be so uncertain, illusive and indistinguishable...
Beautiful torch song. I love the hanging onto hope despite reality aspect
This is truly beautiful, so touching may you find (if you've not) your forever and always =)
I can feel the ache and hopeful thought. Always, you write beautifully. Hugggs :)
Always enjoy a love poem--thank you.
" ... Its like forever and almost.
We had the forever,
But the almost came and took you away ..."
Such a tender moment! Well done!
Sweet, sweet, sweet. I could never write love this well!
Simply lovely.
Good poem. I like the ending.
"We had forever but almost came and took you away" - so tender and exposed.
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