Sunday, April 10, 2011 | By: Chim's World of Literature

Never Will I

There's a saying, never say never,
Never again am I gonna let you
Near my heart,
The heart you left out cold not once
Having any remorse for the pain you
Inflicted, crush with a human knife
You tear straight in the chest
Feeling the cold of the stainless steel blade,
Blood dripping on the kitchen floor
As the smile on your face never left.
Never again am I letting my heart get that close to another human.
Never again am I opening the possibility
To find another you just
To be cut raw and open for
The world to see.
Never will I.



This is day 10 of Poetry Month entry from Poetic Asides prompt: Never again poem

Kris so my poem isnt really about Thankfullness, cos i forgot its Tuesday tomorrow & you are early with your Meme....so i hope i can fit in on the TT#4 this wk...

5 comments:

The Book of Shadows (The Dark Side) said...

I have been trying to comment but still failed at each attempt.. this is my 3rd attempt.. :(

I was saying, I feel the thankfulness here.. in my eyes, I saw a hidden thankfulness of acceptance, acknowledge.. the hidden shade..

Chim, it is okay that my linky is up and you can still take your time because I was afraid, I would be asleep by then and then late for the meme to be up.. You can take your time to write and share but in my eyes, this fit... :)

*HUUUG*

Chie Wilks said...

oh..u r so creative...although the story behind the lines is sad..still i felt the person's gratitude. although she'd been hurt she is thankful that she had learning something ...not to be that close again

Star-chuu said...

so touching, but in everything acceptance is the key for a new life from the past she had, nice poem chims. I hope i can also write poem, through this i can express my feelings and overwhelm me. Have a happy TT!!

JamieDedes said...

Some lessons are hard won.

The Reason You Come said...

Oh, this is heartbreaking! I can picture a woman being stabbed in the chest by the love of her life. Sad, but beautifully written.

If this is autobiographical, I hope you can love again, in spite of the memory of the pain.

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