Wednesday, April 6, 2011 | By: Chim's World of Literature

A Postcard From Heaven

A Postcard From Heaven


Dear I have been sending you
A postcard ever since I have left,
I have kept most of the letters
Knowing it would never reach you
But this might be the last one since
You are coming here soon,
I can’t wait to be reunited with you.
I love you and miss you,
I’ll be there waiting near the white gate
As you walk over that cloud,
You will love it here.
Till we meet again.
Postcard from heaven with love.



Award received by Jingle For Poet rally wk41 Thanks Jingle


Poetry Challenge April 2011: Day 2 , Poetic Asides
This is my entry for the Thursday Poets Rally Week 41
I acccepted the Week 40 & nominated Kim Nelson, it was linked back to Jingle with acceptance poem.

18 comments:

The Book of Shadows (The Dark Side) said...

This may sound sad.. yet upon a second read or third, it seemed to be taking things astride.. Living life as how it is supposed or meant to be..

I feel the peace and serenity in this..

Olivia said...

ooohhh!
sad, wanting, loving.. very well crafted pouring in each of the human emotions so well in such few words..

I love your coffee and snack! Thanks
Hugs xox

Maggie said...

Sad, but full of hope and love.

Very lovely.

JamieDedes said...

Chim, this is lovely and poignant. Well done.

Thanks for your visit to my site, Chim. You should know that your comment went into spam, likely because you added a link to it.

Enjoy Thursday Poets Rally. Nice to "meet" you.

Jamie :-)

Anonymous said...

A postcard from heaven... that is beautifull. Good poem Chim!

Anonymous said...

This actually made me smile. They will be together soon :)

Anonymous said...

you wrote this chim? wow! and tq for coming by mine!

Jingle said...

spiritual and abstract yet real..

stunning word flow.
enjoyed it very much.

Anonymous said...

Poignant simplicity - a heartwarming message that brings a sorrowful smile. Thank you for sharing.

glh x

Thoughts Not Lost said...

Beautiful!

Anonymous said...

Touching

JP

http://tasithoughts.wordpress.com/2011/04/07/lovers-we-are-now/

Anonymous said...

Simple and beautiful :-)

Anonymous said...

Very nice.

Unknown said...

wow how lovely and comforting hope they have the same response where i'm going !.lovely poem thank you.

Anonymous said...

Beautiful poem, sad but very hopeful.

Anonymous said...

Very nice poem, great work!

Rashmi said...

Wonderful concept...That love for the partner and the waiting part wait near white gate...beautiful...

Vinay Leo R. said...

a postcard from heaven! ah what a thought, Chim! wonderful execution! :D

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